Now, that is more like what I envisioned when I first read Ana Cristina’s challenge… The greatest strength is that this would be an excellent story even if there was no challenge to inspire it!
this is hilarious! the whole horror vibe, running from a presence, the door slams shut, then confronted by THAT ! great job! I agree that this is a great stand-alone story too!
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