Wow.
I’m… I’m speechless. What I wanna know is what happened to initiate this… this… whatever it is.
This is very good…

I have to agree. No words for this. However, I find it absolutely amazing that all of..that, was done in a mere three minutes.
Very well written..

Chillingly ruthless and disturbing.

Heehee, prequel up for funsies.

I couldn’t help myself… I felt I just had to add something. I think I left it pretty wide open for continuation.
Or not, depending on if anyone wants to continue it.

This is wicked cool. I just kept reading and my jaw dropped further and further…
_{200 billion stars}

Agreed with everyone! You’re not a terrorist disguised as a writer, are you…?

That was freaking awesome. As I think CMT , KOM called it, I think I just had a nerdgasm.