Still using that ‘would’ tense, very tricky. But great addition. Still seems to leave it open whether he’s to help the people or the system.

I couldn’t help myself. I had to jump in. This little series is just so awesome.
Hope the sequel fits :)

“He would’ve also noticed the stranger’s chest failed to rise and fall.” That sentence was perfect. Before, with the descriptions, I was like eh, that’s a tiny bit cheesy. Then I was like oh, that’s awesome!