I liked the comedic edge to it.

I agree with grey, it kinda makes you think theres going to be an eerie solution (“we could report it”) and then to just throw in the comedic swich is beautiful.

I like this. It’s really open to interpretation. I’m going to try my hand at a prequel. =)

Heh, sounds like my parents talking :)

S.J.

Hilarious.

this was good :]

FUNNY !!!