Comments on Knowledge Is Fear [500 Ficlets Challenge] by NightMaiden

Mistress Elsha Hawk

it’s the green eyed girl! maybe…
I think it would stink to be stuck in high school forever… Well, parts of it…
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:53:37.
PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

this is just begging for a sequel. you really have a knack for starting these things off.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:53:37.
.:band baby:.

oooh. what is his secret exactly…? nice begining.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:53:37.
THX 0477

Lovely, just lovely, very consistently in the character’s frame of reference. At first I thought it was a humans/vampires coexisting thing, but the last line made the whole situation clear. Very exciting.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:53:37.
Freedom

Ahhmazing job on this. I loved the last line and I’m curious, like the rest, to know his secret. A sequel would be cool but overall, thanks for entering![:
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:53:37.
Wyatt Aapr

An alien passing itself off as human, no doubt. Good job.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:53:37.
NightMaiden2

@Wyatt Aapr: Actually, a vampire passing himself up for a human. Sorry for not making it clear.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:53:37.