That’s powerful… and now I’m curious. I wanna know what happened before this; any sort of sequel from anybody would be great, I think.
Well, well done.

Intriguing story. At first I wasn’t sure if his situation was literal, just because the beginning was so…expository and detached, I guess, but now I want to know what happened. Very good descriptions and setup.

yea it sounded poetic at first. i echoe everything said without saying it!

Whoa, every so often, I come across a ficlet that’s just absolutely amazing. This one far surpassed that.
Positively Brilliant!

Whoa, every so often, I come across a ficlet that’s just absolutely amazing. This one far surpassed that.
Positively Brilliant!

wow! that was just so wonderfully written. the words just capture the reader and makes you want to finish reading. and it just flowed so well. Just Wonderful!!!! :D

wish I could weave a fantastic comment like the others but, I’m afraid I lack that kind of knowledge, well-written, intriguing, overall fantastic..

yippe fantastic