To tell you the truth, I normally don’t pay attention to romance – especially not high school stuff. It’s just all so predictable and unoriginal – except for this. You have a great way with descriptions and flow. Keep going.

I agree with Stovo about the descriptions and such. Awesome job.

yes, told with much skill. bravo!

Agreed! I love the ending lines of all of these ficlets. They’re sweet and I can’t help but grin.