Yech and eww, but chillingly done. Convincingly brutal.

This screams Micheal Myers. killing a chick for no reason. Great stuff. This is the kind of sensless killing that has gotten dragged ito the fears of kids from horror movies, and you wrote that the best possible in one ficlet. Awesome entry. *

Brutal and great. Like most of these entries, great lead and great point of view narrative.

Agree, agree and agree. What else is there for me to say? ;D Great job and well done!

i feel like there was a lot of focus on the fact that now that he found a cave he could kill someone… as if he had always wanted to, and “hey” he had the chance now, so he might as well. intreresting.

i feel like there was a lot of focus on the fact that now that he found a cave he could kill someone… as if he had always wanted to, and “hey” he had the chance now, so he might as well. intreresting.

Poor Alisha. She was a prodigy, being a nine year old High School Freshman, struck down before her prime. She could have cured cancer with her advanced intelligence, but it is not to be. So sad.

O_O woah. I must agree with everyone. Chilling, brutal, and very well written.