That is really cool. I mean, I knew what type of “games” they would be off the bat, but the first sentence just really confirmed that. Nice cold, emotionless, narration, giving the motivation that we can’t identify with. You’ve successfully made an inhuman villain.

Agreed with Stovo… that’s absolutely ruthless. It’s so twisted, so inhuman… so perfectly in line with this challenge, especially the first line and the last paragraph.
shudders Brilliant.

This is frightening. Very well written…perhaps too well written. Now I’m going to be glancing over my shoulder all evening. :) Good job!

Again, i see people resorting to other villians but giving each there own original twist. In this one there’s Jigsaw and the 2 torturers from Funny Games. I’m not saying you got the idea from that, but it’s interesting to see that a lot of these killer ideas have been done before. I guess my challenge was just seeing those movies again with the unique spin from you guys. Anyways, great entry and near perfect for the start of a movie. *

Again, i see people resorting to other villians bu giving each there own original twist. In this one there’s Jigsaw and the 2 torturers from Funny Games. I’m not saying you got the idea from that, but it’s interesting to see that a lot of these killer ideas have been done before. I guess my challenge was just seeing those movies again with the unique spin from you guys. Anyways, great entry and near perfect for the start of a movie. *

I can almost picture the twisted smile. Or would that be a smirk. Either way, wonderful job.

Ya i definitly liked the concept of “playing games” tho I think the story could hav been a little better… i still liked it… i need to read through it again

I get a Jigsaw vibe from this as well. I’m actually a little troubled that this is yet another serial killer who seems to be a child. See, this is why I had a vasectomy and will forever celebrate Not A Father’s Day.

this kind of freaked me out.

very good job!

You did a great job creating one twisted kid here. I may never go over anybody’s house again.

loved the phrase “a meadow on fire”.

What a demented child. That was great, I’m glad you won in the twisted category.