This is tragic.

Tragic, but well written.

i agree with the above. but also. boy needs to move on! haha =)

wow i sound so insensitive there! haha. oh well. O:-)

I love the third and fifth stanzas especially. So sad, but very well written.

I agree with all of the above, very tragic

ouch. effective use of repetition. gets the point across but also hints at some hesitation.