wow…. that was good.

Incredible use of language and quite the ode to death as a transcendent event and not something to be feared, loathed, or even particularly mourned.

Wow. Wow. I am extremely impressed by your use of words- you wield them as a weapon. I especially like the extended metaphor of emptiness being an old friend. Great job.

yes, this is a transcendent piece! It is rich a vibrant and full of grace!