WOW .
very powerful
very very touching

I agree – just wow.

I really like this; you usually don’t read this kind of scenario. If anything, the narrator would usually be the one apologizing, saying the victim didn’t deserve it, or the victim being forgiving, or whatnot.

I love this dynamic, they’re interesting roles.

Very well written. Good Job.

It’s been said, but I’ll say it again. Wow.

Tragic.. well told.. visual images are hard to take.

Wow. Extremely well written, and visually dynamic. Great job.
LoA

violent, graphic, and a very unique POV , the repentant, lost lover who apparently did him in…

Wickedly cool. It’s rather ambiguous whether or not the killing was intentional, but it’s quite clear that the loss is painful. Well done.