Are/were you an English teacher at some point? Professions aside, this is a greatly informitive piece. Now that I think about it, the advice makes perfect sense.
I have taken notes on one of favorite books before… though I don’t remember getting very far. I think if I go back and take your advice, specifically about noting the way the author advances the story, I can edit my own novel better!
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