this is good =]

Intriguing take on the picture. It was ambiguous enough to inspire sequels, but just a little too ambiguous, I think. It was a nice first-person narrative, but it didn’t really go anywhere, almost as if you were just repeating to take up space instead of as a narrative device. I mean, don’t take my word for it, I’m guilty of it and I’m not a literary genius. Just my thoughts.