lots of powerful, bitter emotion displaying poignant ignorance and reflections. wonderfully done. you got the message across well.

lots of powerful, bitter emotion displaying poignant ignorance and reflections. wonderfully done. you got the message across well.

cheers wow, just wow. I dunno what else to say. Wow in a good way for sure!

Impressive. Not like, “Okay… that is impressive.” But, “WOW. IMPRESSIVE . YOU’VE IMPRESSED ME .” (I wanted to use a different word other than great, good, amazing, awesome, and etc. Even though those would all work for the way I feel about this ficlet.)
I like the anger in this. It screams off the page.
Everyone should be awarded the right to say what they think and care or not care about whatever they want. You got your argument across really well. Like I said, it screams at me. Greatness again, Buddy =)

Impressive. Not like, “Okay… that is impressive.” But, “WOW. IMPRESSIVE . YOU’VE IMPRESSED ME .” (I wanted to use a different word other than great, good, amazing, awesome, and etc. Even though those would all work for the way I feel about this ficlet.)
I like the anger in this. It screams off the page.
Everyone should be awarded the right to say what they think and care or not care about whatever they want. You got your argument across really well. Like I said, it screams at me. Greatness again, Buddy =)

okay… really… double postage. sorry about that.