I REALLY loved this. I found the part about asking if he rememered himself highly original and brilliant.

great imagery. I love the whole concept: the evil defines the good.

I really liked this. I especially like the idea that evil defines good.

This was very interesting. I really enjoyed reading it.

wow great job in the descriptions..

Great metaphors. I loved it!

wonderful. dark. foreboding? yes.

wow dats raw fa sho dawg! you should add to this!