Very good, I feel like I’m watching star trek. I’ma call you Cap’n Kirk : )

I always liked Star Wars better, but ok lol :)

I like this a lot! while i also prefer star wars, something about this is rather trekky but it doesn’t take away from the cool factor.
Color me amused

It feels real. Good stories always feel real.

This is great, and I like the interrupted ending.

owch. okay. no really i like the ending.

It’s almost like the other side of War of the Worlds (the radio version, not the recent movie)… brilliant!

Did you run out of characters? :-)

well there’s a definite Star Trek theme to this … and god-bless ya for it… “I LOVE TREK ”

For those who may have missed it—I believe Frostbite he has made a couple of Star Trek: Voyager references..

7 of 9 – being the borg crew member..
and Intrepid: USS Voyager was an Intrepid Class Starship..

Very nice..
Love the story too!!
Hope to see more.