Outstanding story, very original and complete. I like the numbered structure a lot, and it’s sure to inspire many copies here, if not elsewhere. I think the transition between 9 and 10 is just right, as the previous poster said, implying that the Editor threw down the pages at this point. Great work!
I’m generally a fan of things that take an interesting twist on the Bible. I actually took a class on Genesis and we made a lot of the same points you did.
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