Love the last line.

Love it!!! I especially love this line “I feel so safe here in your embrace and find it absolutely sexy that you are so strong that you could crush me in an instant but instead you hold me softly but firmly, like you will never hurt me ” Awesome…

i just loved it soooo much i mean like that is soo.. i don’t even have words for it… i love every line from it so badly. Congratulations, it was perfect.

awwww thanks guys!!!

Wow! I really liked that. Its somthing that I can relate to and so decriptive too! Fabulous job.

i loved it.

Aww…the end was so sad…I’ve felt like that before..

wonderfully descriptive

Wow, I did not expect that ending. It is beautifully written and comes you captive.

keep* sorry

i really like it

That’s really good. I like it. Keep writing =]

beautiful writing. tragic, but beautiful.

I like the stream-of-consciousness style, mixed with near-lyrical prose.