Excellent. I can imagine where these people came from and where they are going, and it’s going to be a fun trip. This seems almost like a sequel to some of your other ficlets here. If you ever package these up into a big story, let me know so I can read it.

Thank you! Yes, now that I read it back, it does seem that way. For some reason, my writing tends to fixate on events that happen in cars. Don’t really know why. Thank you for the feedback!

This is so adorable. I like the way you used the labelling as description. I’ve met a person sort of like that, I know what you mean. An understandably enigmatic, makes-you-think kind of person.
This does seem a little like some of the other things you’ve else done…and it could make a really great novel! A writer’s perspective on a beautiful relationship in all it’s stages. I’d read it!

Sorry…that “else” isn’t supposed to be there. Funny how that happens, ha ha.

Mhm, definatly a makes-you-think person. Glad ya like it!

i love, love, love this!!! it is so well written and so believable and just so amazing. i honestly love your writing so much! it’s great

being able to write about love this well, is an incredible talent. i applaud you, for you have written a fantastic ficlet

Thank you!