i like that,,reminds me of a book i once read and enjoyed very much

You have a very clear and engaging writing style, and it shows in this ficlet as most of your others. I reallly liked the description of the “leader” and his minions. Great work!

Great twist using a fantastical setting as a bit of social commentary, one of the great little possibilities of fantasy and sci-fi.
LoA
And there’s a sequel and prequel, even!

Rokkin’!