Oooo! Interesting! A different direction than I was going, but I really want to see where you branch off to…

Fabulous. Very unique perspective. I really enjoyed this.

The chaos effect: a butterfly flaps his wings, and we have Henry on the floor unconscious instead of on a plane over the Mississippi. Splendid!

Hahaha! Sorry, T.F Torrey’s comment was funny…
this story is confusing, but in a good way. It’s very intriguing and I’d like to see where you take it.

Mysterious coincidence that the box should be at his aunt & uncle’s house. Interesting too that it was one of his favorite compositions and he didn’t know it.