i like the ending. =P

haha aww how horrible =(

“horrible” or “haha”? =)

It’s so wrong, but I can’t stop laughing.

a horrible twist of fate. marvellous. : )

Twisted sense of humor. I loved it however.. poor snail.

poor snail!!! but this is really funny…i wonder if the crab did it maliciously?

This was…funny, but in a worse way. It started out with a fable-type ambience, but then you killed the snail. Which we all knew was going to happen…but still. You just saw the picture and thought, “why isn’t the snail shrivelled up like some raisin-ized version of escargot? It’s salt water he’s headed into, isn’t it?”

Stovohobo…did you ever think it could be a sea snail?

Sorry, that sounded like an accusation. I didn’t mean it that way. Just a guess.

Haha, I thought it would end with evolution (land snail to sea snail). I totally forgot about the salt. I loved it.

definitly obivious what going to happen but i didnt laugh till i read it so its ok. Just the fact that its a story of a snail’s death is funny. love it! WRITE MORE !!!

sum dum snale

i like it! ha ha. love the ending!

Nicely told story!

lol!!!!!!! i totally forgot that they die with salt until u killed it – awesome!!

ROFL ! That is so funny, I also forgot snails die from salt. I did think the crab was going to help it though. Not help it die…