So sweet! Excellent job!

Aaw, how cute!

very cute

i agree, i find it rather cute but a bit predictable. you know right from the start what will happen in the end. I must say, not my best work. =(

Still, it is so sweet!! And think in some way or another every one can relate. Heh.

Very delightful—and sometimes it’s nice to write something predictable yet lovely at the same time. Also, it probably seems more predictable to you because you wrote it and knew where you wanted it to go.

its like one of those fairy-tale romances I’ve always dreamed about

so sweet ‘so needs a sequel