Very interesting, seems like an old inspirational-type poem. The tone seems very familiar. Your poem made me think about myself, and I liked it.

Sometimes all you need is to write one thing, even if it is the worst thing you’ve ever written, and it will open the floodgates to something great.

wonderful; i liked the phrasing.

oh gosh this is gorgeous. I like the phrasing of it, and the fact that it is so blatent and not at all held back.

that line “dig deep into your emotional well-/ being”….so cool

im confoozed. but thts just mee. confoozeness happens. alot. but i liked it. =)

The intensity hits you in the face like a swing from Barry Bonds.