You make the baby tiger sound so cute!! I think you need to work on saying a bit more? And I don’t know how mobile a tiger is, having only been born thirteen days before. :/ You might want to check that out, for accuracy’s sake.

you say you want help to be a better writer, well here it is. wen u rite a story, try to make the readers ready for more of ur stories, leave them hanging at the end of ur story. But most of all, make sure that ur story will only be able to hav a sequel or prequel written by only YOU !

and don’t worry about having accurracy about facts about ur characters, spelling, or pronounciation, cuz not being accurate in those categories is called taking “Writer’s Authority”

Reminds me of Simba in The Lion King. Creative!

Very cute . . . I love the word rawr!