This is a compact little story, already starting something bigger. Very nice.

Thanks a lot!

makes me think of a chuck palahniuk novel, right away you know the character is in peril…and you know there is a twinge of humour and sarcasm under it all.

Haha, that was one of my favourite ficlets. Bravo!

Thank you!

This is incredibly good. The end was vague, but such is life with a 1024 character limitation!

Thank you very much for the compliment! I tried to leave room for a sequel, and apparently there was enough.

that was really funny,,i liked it very much,,,,

Thanks! (Though maybe it’s just my dumb computer, you gave it one star. I’m OK with that, if you mean it, but it contradicts your comment. Thanks anyway)

Yeah, 1 Star is a little harsh – must have been a mistake. I’ll bump my rating up to 5 to counter the effects…. : )

Haha, thanks buddy. ; )

I really liked it; has me wondering who your narrator is, what was in the package, and what he previously did to upset the mafia. Well done.