Lovely!! I think a good sequel might have the tubby friend being afraid of the vacuum cleaner, and insisting it be removed?
Well I was even going to have him get out of the pool because he was afraid, and then the cleaner would smirk or something. But sometimes 1024 characters just isn’t enough.
lol, I’ll work on a sequel when i get a couple pages of my report done. x.x;;
lol nice-- different- hopefully fyora wouldn’t mind if i tried to put together a sequel of the tubby boy??
There can be two sequels. There are on some other ficlets.
I like this. It’s a creative perspective. Honestly, I wasn’t even aware swimming pools had vacuum cleaners. Thanks for opening my eyes!
Haha, your welcome, I guess. Thank Fyora for the idea, though.
I thought it was pretty funny.
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