I LOVE IT !! I really really like this!! it makes u think, which is good cuz its cool to think about!! fantastic job! can’t wait to see more from you!!!

p.s. i don’t kno how these stories come o u so easily and quickly. i mean i kno this one was inspiration, but i mean the other ones too, u r just a great writer!

Very intriguing…I’d like to see where this goes.
Can women be Builders? ‘Twould be interesting…

Mia—I thank you for your words of encouragement. =D

Fyora—Shore, why not? (Though I don’t think you’d want them to be, or anyone, for that matter) =D

Cool story line! I’ll be checking ack here to see if he succeeds in ending his torture.

Thanks! The sequel’s out. . . =D

I like the tone and the feel, and this character is immediately likable. This is clearly the start of something big. Very well done.

I like this. Will this perhaps end up to be one of the epic series here on Ficlets? I hope so, it deserves to be!

This was a good way to begin a story, and I really like his sarcasm.