No Hispanic painters were named Dadaelee, right? =D

lets hope not, otherwise you’ll get a bunch more comments that have nothing to do with what you’ve written…like this one

i like the part with the guard, it just has this underlying humour that makes you feel guilty about laughing about.

N.B. 1st comment—haha…yeah.

N.B. 2nd comment—Yeah, the birdie’s the closest to mature stuff that I’ve ever gotten. I lead an exciting life. =D

So…now I’m thinking that, perhaps, the whole purpose ofthe Endless Corridor is to quell the restless who may bring change to the society in which they live. Let’s see if that turns out to be right.
Great work, by the way.

Nice. I like that you’ve added Dadaelee as a possible love interest, and she’s already done her little bit to defend Dali (whose name I do like, even if it’s the same as a surrealist painter.)