ooooooooo…scary!! really good! it gave me chills. luvv the last sentence!!!

really great description of events. reminds me of once upon a time in mexico or whatever that johnny depp movie was called.

i actually wrote this to pay homage to that movie. I was watching it wishing i were salma hayek and decided to write about it from first person hoping it would make me feel better… it didnt haha

Great job! You really nailed the style and feel. Great last line!!