I love your take on this. It’s so. . .deep, I guess, and I love how you switched between different passengers’ stories. The Train of Thought seems to be a profound madness. (Yes I just made that up) =)

hm interesting prespective on things.

I like that we get to see a different passenger on the train, and I love that it seems the government is collecting them for some nefarious purpose.

i can tell this is going to be a good series. quite an interesting take on things these people have….
LoA