This is wonderfully written. Fabulous ending. Great job.

Excellent work.

I definitely want to see where this leads…

Did you say Ohio? I’m stuck in…I mean, I live in Ohio. Lovely, lovely story, by the way.

Hey – I’m stuck in – I mean live in Indiana but with relatives in Ohio and the region. Glad you liked it – was inspired by a story my 98 y/o Aunt Ruth told me at the 2007 family reunion in Eaton, Indiana. There is also a great story about Hobos during the depression that I want to write about. Before Aunt Ruth dies, I want to record at least 4 hours with her for later material. She is an incredible woman – drove to the reunion herself!

I like this. It’s neat, but real. Yet it also has a sense of wrongness about it that might come out in a sequel?

this is beatiful, great story

wow. really really beautiful.

Compelling, with promise of good (possibly twisted) things to come.