You can identify so much with the character, fantastic descriptions!

Air travel never sounded so lonely. How does the challenge thing happen, by the way?

wow! love that story! that’s how i feel on the last day of vacation when my flight arrives 3 hours late (as always) or gets cancelled. good thing for mommy, daddy, and bro!

Ahh, I’ve just gotten to expierience this. I’ve been up since four, traveled through 3 countries, and my two liters of diet coke haven’t helped. I’m convinced I’m falling apart. Great story though.

Interesting spin on the prompt and a great job on the story. It’s very easy to relate to, in the melancholy fashion of lonely people everywhere.

I’ve never had an experience like that, but I liked your story. nod

Good story, i wonder if it would be even better told in 1st person.. just wondering, not a criticism.