Sorry if my British knowledge isn’t up to snuff; I am American.

I rather liked it. Your British intellect is just fine.

Ha, I pride myself on even using “lorry” instead of “truck”. Go me!

I’m reading a crime novel by a Scottish author, and I would say you use many of the same words.

Clearly we are in jolly ole England. You conjured up the atmosphere very well, but where was the Fog? j/k Is he Jack the Ripper?

id love to write a prequel, but i wouldnt do your story justice :(

this is great, crazy-intense.