I liked this. It’s haunting, and the scene stands well on its own.

wow. nice surprise viewpoint. i liked this.

I agree, haunting, yet eloquently written.

Well….all of my compliments have been taken from the peeps above, so….ditto. <=D

ditto is definitely the word in this situation

An amazing prose, the line “a father of two…”

bloody goosebumps! very effective stuff.