I like the first three paragraphs. They are very good descriptions! Good. Keep it going!

Thanks, horrorfan13!

well, you’re doing very good at keeping a “weird” feeling…naw but realy, good job. i like it.

Whoever it was laughed…in my head
Hate when that happens.
Keep the series up. I want to know what can save his granddaughter from whatever it is that she has.

There’s no sequel?!

WHAT IS UP WITH THAT ?!

Im serious here people

WHAT IS UP WITH THAT ?!

Stovo – you know the drill

Now mush mush – get writing!