Wonderful descriptions.

Thanks! I liked writing the “vocal cords of doom” part. =)

I loved that line! I was about to interrupt my reading to say so, too. “the rasping vocal cords of doom.” Genius. I could hear that in my head.

Vochal? Vocal. Chords? Cords.

i like this. like almost everything of yours, its very original, creative, and attention-grabbing.

Wow, thank you!