Very nice. I like your spin on the words.

I agree with Batak, a great spin on words. I loe the names, too!

that’s awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I like the ending. “For this is the work of the Platypus-Kumquat Killer!” …hilarious.

Your mind is a very strange place, isn’t it?

My mind, a strange place? Um, yeah, it kind of is. But I have a lot of fun there.