_“Do I have to be Grasshopper?â€?

“Yes. Over.â€?

“Why?â€?

Brass Eagle crunched down on his cigar. “Because you’re still a student. Follow orders. Over.â€?_

that’s hilarious! and very well written, keep up the good work

nice. i would like seeing a sequel, maybe a prequel on this.

Flirtingwithabrickwall—thanks, I had fun writing it! I’ve taken an affinity for drawing many of the characters I make up for ficlets, like Farvus, an IronDragyn (I think it looks cool, imagine metal. Rusty metal), all the Endless Corridor people, and Brass Eagle (if you think of a tough guy in an aviator suit, leather cap and all, you’ve got him.). Unfortunately, I don’t really have a scanner right now, so…
blueeyedwonder-thanks! This ficlet was just a random thought.

Hmm, interesting.

Seriously, will I ever get a straight answer out of you? “Hmm…” “interesting” “all right…” ;-)

Good beginning. I like when I can laugh and still be so intrigued I have to go to the sequel.
And a blessing on your head for putting a space in between the lines of dialogue. I know it costs characters, but aesthetically, it’s so much better.

Amen to that! (That last part, I mean)