very well said, the way you write it is almost poetic.

sorry i meant to give you 5 stars…

o.k i guess i did …

if this is “almost creative” …

Nice imagery, if that doesn’t have substance I’ll be able to walk through walls.

Wow, thank you for the feedback, everybody!

Beautiful, beautiful writing.

wow, i love how this just flows…i don’t know how to describe it, but yah, it’s almost poetic.

This is beautiful prose. I’m going to have to say this is one of my favorite pieces of yours. I’ve been there myself, in fact, it was a mood like this that got me started writing to express myself in the beginning.

Thanks. Somehow it seems that I tend get decent writing out of a melancholy sort of mood. Although I’ve found that writing it out doesn’t make it go away, but it helps me understand it. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

Melancholy moods…definetly my muse. Love the story, beautifully written. Keep this up.

This is beautiful. i feel like this when im at the beach. everything is just so perfect it makes you feel so creative. almost.. :)

I like it a lot…reminds me of someone, haha.

Beautifully captures a piece of what it is to be a sentient and transcendent human on the planet, missing someone we’ve never met. Sure to be anthologized and revered. Very well done.

This is poetic in itself and very well written.

I’ve had that feeling before too.

This peice is devastating, lonesome, and poetic.

I almost feel as though I could write you out in a song, and sing it softly to myself when I get lonely here without you. is a wonderfully descriptive sentence.

with nothing but negative space. was a perfect ending.

wow… this is really beautiful. you almost had me crying…

nice writing
by the way i was wondering if someone will comment on the poem i wrote, it is my first one ..so i will really appreciate it ty :D

not almost creative. it was very creative.

Just re-read it & it’s still gorgeous.

Great Writing. You remind me of how I write.Peace, Joy Lily

Well done!

This is amazing. I can see its been said about a hundred times, but this is so poetic. It flows beautifully.

Your work is so beautiful, rarely have I felt so jealous. When I am almost creative, I’m suffering from writer’s block and probably lazin around my house complaining that I am so bored and have nothing to do. LOL . You paint such a great picture in this piece, in my mind I see an island at night with the moon shining down and the water rippling gently, that’s just great and I love it. :)))

my real comment has been already said by about 10 other people

you are not just a writer you are a creator. there’s a difference, trust me. you create a scene, a writer writes about it. but you have stamped a picture in my mind. this is truly extraordinary!

Thank you, everyone, for all of your kind comments. I’m glad that you’ve enjoyed this piece. It’s one of my favorites that I’ve written, I think.

I’m here to add one more: beautiful work. You literally paint pictures with your words – as I read this I could see the scene play out in my mind’s eye.

beautiful, great vivid imagery and such a powerful feelings, great work!