nice. i really like your perspective-it’s refreshing and different not to read about adolescent love. :) good job. also, nice imagery and phrasing, especially in the last paragraph.

wow….I love that!

I love how the confidence built up in the ‘rock’, and by the end of a very short ficlet, the ‘rock’ thought of it self as a mighty mountain

It’s nice knowing that some things never change.

Really beautiful description, you’ve definitely got a way with words. Good economy as well, it’s very difficult to produce a complete story in so few words. Top stuff!