oh gosh, grasshoppers found the caretaker and is probably going to be a floating teenager. smart kid. PLEASE change the plot to something less guessable and cruel!!
(well, he could be a floating teenager until he escapes, i suppose…why the crap am i still talking, im not your editor…just write a sequel!!! this is so frustrating!!!)

I’m very intrigued by the floating teenagers. I can understand why, if you have a surplus of teens, you’d keep them locked away, but I don’t understand why you’d have the surplus to begin with.