that is really sad…especially cuz im an enviromentalist!! really really great piece of work…just change your tense in the first sentence and it’ll be good to go!

that is really sad…especially cuz im an enviromentalist!! really really great piece of work…just change your tense in the first sentence and it’ll be good to go!

Ooh you’re totally right. Thanks for the heads up!

Oh, this is terrible. What’s happening itself, not your writing. Hehe.

I loved everything about it.

I loved it as well. It reminds me, kind of, of the movie Fern Gully. I like the internal battle your character was undergoing…poignant and real.

A terribly sad & true story, beautifully told.