Hmm…it would be very interesting to see a continuation of this. Also, it might just be me, but the organization in the second half of the first paragraph seems to be a little off.

Ehh.. I wasn’t really trying that hard. I just had a lot of random thoughts to jot down… I may do a second part of this. I actually just joined today, so I’m still getting the hang of everything.

I think this is a great first ficlet. Or…second. Whichever it is if you’ve joined today. Nice descriptions and idea.