Comments on Fee, Fi, Fo, and Fum by Stovohobo

Stovohobo

Not nice flow or anything…but I like to think I had a severe limit of 1024 characters hanging over my head.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:43:46.
blueyedwonder

hahaha. fo shizzle. how amusing. it has okay flow…not like WOW ! AMAZING! or anything but not WOW ! TERRIBLE!. i actually like it.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:43:46.
BetwINeen

I luv it!!!!!
i think it fits the challenge very well, and the dialogue is great for the names, i think its a very well written story (:
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:43:46.
Batak Beatrix

Haha, I love the idea.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:43:46.
Fyora Cartagan

This one is very amusing :) Especially because it reminds me of when I told a close friend of mine that I wanted him to call me Fy (Fee) instead of Fyora. He said it didn’t sound like me. I guess he was right. Good job!
showing no preference at this point
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:43:46.
Kermitgorf

I laughed till i .. stopped. You have a gift for the comically absurd.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:43:46.
Sophia D'Soleil

I LOVE YOU STOVOHOBO !!!!!!!!
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:43:46.
N555champ /\and/\ X-Ninja

yeah you are right the flow was bad good story to make a sequel out of
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:43:46.
Yeah Write!

i agree completely! (for lack of more interesting things to say)
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:43:46.