hahaha that was so retarded it was good…it made me laugh, perhaps retareded is the wrong word to use, different i guess, and seeing how everyone else apparently didnt appreciate it made me laugh that much harder…very entertaining to say the least ^^
wow you guys are dumb.. I agree that the UFO idea was stupid but everything else was well written and good. In the original story it talks about Sam being popular, obviously he could have gotten himself into some bad things (drugs, etc) so he could be top dog!!
I don’t know why people automatically sign up as a “user [fill-in-the-blank] just to follow along with the other users and give filthy comments normally reserved for youtube or something. I’ve actually been surprised at how a public website like this has sustained it’s string of positive comments. It seems that’s changed since people think that if you don’t know who they are, they can say anything about you they want. I liked the story, and being featured ficlet more than once speaks for itself.
i think it needs more to it right now this story sux more than a vaccum itd be bettr if it continued to tell you about the ufo but right now its horrible
“What makes you think I give a damn?â?—hah exactly what i think about the Seriously, all these 8 and 9 year olds who think they can read need to get off this site… statement. ….
Well written as usual. ~~~ As for all the UFO complaints: A.) That’s what a character said he saw, not necessarily what happened. B.) This is FICTION ! It doesn’t have to be real. It has to seem real within the story. It’s called “suspension of beliefs.” C). Saying something is “gay” or “retarded” because it doesn’t fit into your narrow mold of ideas is a great way of displaying your own ignorance and disgusting the people who read or hear it. D.) Buy an imagination. Or at least a Thesaurus.
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