owwch. mean lady! but really, good story. i would love seeing a sequel on this.

haha women can be so cruel. There were a few times when punctuation could have helped a sentence, but overall very nicely done.

(Whistle) Wah wah waaaaaaah….BANG! Oh, such an unexpected ending. Liked it. =)

Haha, I love it.

SEQUEL !!!

Westerns are hard to write, you did it well. Challenge should be everyone write a western!