Haha, ohhhh this was great. It made me laugh.
Hilarious. At first I just thought it was a trendy, theme spa in L.A. or something. Nicely done.
hahahaha!! that is funny!! i LOVED it!!
Is the hell of it the waiting? This confused me a bit. :/ Still funny though.
Well, it wasn’t really supposed to be a statement on punishment in the afterlife. I just use the title quote a lot in real life, so I thought…well…what if it was?
ha ha…great story, great idea for a story.
I love the title (and the idea that you use it in real life), and the opening line was just – classic.
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