I like this, you just may want to separate the lines a little so I can distinguish what’s going on. Just sayin’. <=)

interesting, I love red but wow, thats alot of red

oooo thats totally me – i liebe red it’s my fav colour

minus the snootiness and the ugly dog and the stupid dog’s name

i just realised my comment sounded harsh to YOU but im being harsh to your CHARACTER just to clear that up

wow vivid story.. lots of detail like the color red.. and you mentioned an irish setter.. who has reddish fur.. very well done! Belissimo!!